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kay blackrose

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Join date : 2010-09-06
Location : California

PostSubject: ITS GETTING HOT HOT HOT   Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:49 pm

Hello my name is Kay, I'm 18 and usually happy. I love to talk to anyone and everyone so just come talk to me.
I'm new so if there is anything I need to know that’s important please tell me Smile
Appearance: Black long hair with some white highlights in the bottom part of hair. Has big green eyes and is 5’7. Has no scars or scrapes.

Gender: Female

Weapons: none

Abilities: Can make a force field around myself and others, can also stop others powers if needed (eyes turn white when stopping others powers)

Background:
I do not have any parents because mine were killed in front of a gas station when I was only 5... Since then I have been in an orphanage. At age 10 I ran away from the Orphanage and now I am on my own...
When I was 11 I discovered what my powers were. I was living under a bridge when some guy tried to put me into his car, and I refused. He pulled out a gun and pulled the trigger right at my heart but the bullet stopped about a foot in front of me, that’s when I realized that I had some sort of force field.
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Garulia

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Join date : 2010-09-03

PostSubject: Re: ITS GETTING HOT HOT HOT   Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:35 pm

Okay tone down your power a bit and take it out of first person. Make it third. I like it otherwise.
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