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PostSubject: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 3:29 pm

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Subject Name: Axel
Alias:Ghost
Call Sign:Leo

Age :18

Gender: Male

Appearance:
-Height: 5'11
-Weight: 176
-Hair colour: Black with red highlights
-Skin colour: Tan
-Body type: Athletic built made for moving quickly.
-Eye colour:Green
-Street Clothing: Black t-shirt and matching jeans with two chains around the waist.
-Work Clothing: See Avatar
-Notable Markings: Has a tattoo of a ancient symbol that covers his whole back.

Weapons: Twin daggers. Curved used for quick slashing. Chain: A long chain that had been sharped along the edged and the tip is a pike looking tip with a sharp point. Used for long rage slashing and for throwing it forward to pierce. Has a 8 foot reach. The chain is wrapped around the right arm and is dyed black to blend in with his clothing.

Abilities:Silent death: When Axel goes camo on his own he usually has a clear mind and like this he is faster in his attacks. Surrounding areas: Whether it is from his camo or something else Axel can feel when someone enters a area of where he is within a mile distance making his Powers more effective. Martial Arts: Trained by the old woman every day for 3 years has made Axel very keen in close distance fighting.
Natural abilities:Silent walking. Axel can move silent as death even outside his camouflage.

Metapowers:chameleonism: The true length of these powers are unknown so far when he is Spooked Axel will vanish into his surroundings so thoroughly he can't be seen by any type of means. Nor can he be smelled or sensed. Axel has been working and so far he can turn to his camo for 5 minutes but it saps his energy. Even 5 minutes Axel can usually do what he set out too.(Has a 10 minute recharge time) However when he is spooked and reflex kicks in as long as he is scared he can stay in this form indefinitely but it usually only lasts until he feels safe again. (The only draw back is that Telepaths can sense him)

Wall crawl: This is a mystery even to Axel but he can crawl on walls and leap with amazing accuracy.

Heat Vision: Can see body heat.

Heightened Reflexes: The power to react faster than normal.

Back-story: Axel doesn't know where he came from since he was 5 he has drifted from area to area living off whatever he could from Birds to Rats to survive in this world. Axel met a old woman when he was 9 and lived with her for three years before she passed away. Axel buried the woman in the middle of nowhere next to her old cottage and once again turned his sights on the open world. Axel lived in solitude his entire life and living that way made him paranoid and highly skittish. Axel has a problem trusting others and will see them as a enemy before a ally making him dangerous to others.

The day Axel turned 18 he was ambushed by a odd group in his fear Axel vanished right before there eyes but to him Axel had just huddled down with his arms over his head waiting death. The ambushing force surprised began to search the area before taking off different paths leaving a bewildered Axel watching them go. Not one to look a gift horse in the mouth Axel fled his old stomping grounds too look for a place he would be safe. Axel noticed he was being hunted with that on his mind it drove him deeper into paranoia and he snapped his mind going crazy and in his insanity he killed 4 of the hunters. Axel has never fully recovered making him a person who is insane and prone to mood switch from a brave warrior to a cowering baby who no one would expect was a fighter, Axel found a old weapon shed and hunkered down and while in there he found a array of odd weapons and clothing and without a second thought he put it on and ran once again looking for a place he could be safe.


Other Information:Axel is a little insane having been driven that way from being hunted it has made him a lethal predator,
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PostSubject: Re: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:11 pm

It's a bit...over the top, don't you think? Perhaps you should make him a little less Dante on crack? I mean, this guys the combination of night crawler, dante, and spider-man...that's just really really powerful. Perhaps you could drop something? Like, take off one or two of his abilities. It's a little much.

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PostSubject: Re: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:13 pm

On top of that...I think telepaths and metas who can sense their own kind should be able to sense you when you use your chameleonism

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PostSubject: Re: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:25 pm

Well that was the whole point of the ability to not be sensed by any kind. If I let that happen might as well just call it invisibility and be done.

So Dante that's devil may cry? Never played it.

Anyway I kinda see it as just Nightcrawler but instead of teleporting he just vanishes to be unnoticeable.

Don't really see spiderman in there.

As for the abilities I guess I can remove microscopic vision.

The rest is kinda required he is a hunter after all.
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PostSubject: Re: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:27 pm

Um other metas that can sense other metas need to be able to sense him. That would totally disrupt the site and make your character too powerful.

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PostSubject: Re: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:55 pm

Fine.Metas who can sense others can sense him. That doesn't mean they know where he is just that he is around. But since they can sense him i am taking off the bi polar thing.
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PostSubject: Re: Axel the Ghost   Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:18 pm

Accepted.

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